Right Now Bass Tabs by Van Halen

Ok, I'm not real sure on this one, this is my first tab so

Tuning - EADG
*Note-The highest you ever go on the fret board is 10, all the -11-'s you see are like 1-1 not 11.

Intro
G |----------|-----------------|-------------------|
D |-Piano----|-----------------|-------------------|
A |-(rest)---|33-5\---0303-5\--|-0303-5\-----------|
E |----------|-----------------|-----------------\-|
                                                  repeat this
G -----------------------------------------------------------------|    /
D ----3-------------------------------------|              D ------|
A -030--3\---0307-----0305-53---------------|    End With: A -030--|
E ----------------6\------------------------|              E ----1-|

Verse
G -------------------------------------------------|
D -------------------------------------------------|
A -5\-55-3\--3533-----11-0103-5\-55-3\-03---010305-|
E ---------------6\----------------------6\--------|

Pre-Chorus
G -------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D -------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A -11-33-----11-33-55-55778810\11-33------11-33-010101013- (0-1-0-1-3)-----|
E ------11-33-----------------------11-33-----------------  Not 10's or 13-|s

Chorus
G -----------------------------------------------|
D -----------------------------------------------|
A ------1-013-353------1-013-01353------1--3--1~-|
E -11-3-----------11-3-------------11-3----------|

Repeat Verse
Repeat Pre-chorus
Repeat Chorus

Bridge I guess
G ---------------------------------------------|
D ---------------------------------------------|
A -5~--1~---5~---1~--3~-------1--3--010101013--|
E -----------------------1--3------------------|

Repeat Chorus
Outro
I think the bass has a rest, but if your like me and just have to play some thing play 
            *Note, you can play this for the intro too.
G ----------------|
D ----------------|
A -1~------5~-----|   Just play that with the piano untill
E ----------------|            the song is over

~ = Let ring
/ = Slide Up
\ = Slide Down
Tell me what you think of my first tab. It sounds right to me.