Whos Gonna Sing Bass Tabs by The Prototypes

This is probably a little wrong, but at least this way if someone happens along this i 
get good feedback
and by the way this is my first tab so go easy on me, all two of you reading this.

G|--------------00-------------------|
D|--------00-2----2-00---------------|
A|--00-3----------------3------------|
E|-----------------------------------|          X 8 for intro and for chorus
"I play the bass, i play piano!" lalala you know what i mean here

this is the main part for the chorus (it gets harder to hear when it plays when piano comes in)

immediately after the chorus there's a part that simply goes a little like this:

G|---------------------------|
D|---------------------------|
A|--00-----------------------|
E|-----3---------------------|     X 14

Don't get confused with the piano part, it goes more of a A:0 A:0 A:3 (if it where to 
tabs) however if a piano is not forthcoming, or you feel that my tabs are horrible, then 
for it

At the section at 1:55-2:12 or so, just hold
G|-------|
D|-------|
A|----0--|
E|-------|
but as with the last part, I'm not stopping you from doing something else with this note


And now for the finale, the lasttime through the chorus
G|------------0-2-5-2-0-----------------|
D|--------0-2-----------2-0--0----------|
A|--00-3--------------------3--0>>------|
E|--------------------------------------|

my horrible keys:
>> is sustain, but note that in this song its a really soft sustain

jessenicholas@yahoo.com for input and how to make my writing less annoying
  -band website: http://www.prototypesonline.com
  -or www.myspace.com/prototypes

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